| Re: a comment on lament and retrograde by Don-Quixote |
18-Sep-03/10:06 AM |
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long time no see, where have you been?
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| Re: a comment on lament and retrograde by Don-Quixote |
18-Sep-03/10:06 AM |
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| Re: a comment on lament and retrograde by Don-Quixote |
18-Sep-03/10:05 AM |
-smile- indeed, you are a poet. nice suggestion, but like nentwined said, it would require cutting/modifying the wheelchair bit.. hrmm.. i might write a second version.
thanks.
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| Re: a comment on reflexion - dayspring to dusk by DreamerSupreme |
18-Sep-03/10:01 AM |
pullulating - pullulate (verb)
1: Be teeming, be abuzz
2: Move in large numbers
3: Produce buds, branches, or germinate; of plants
4: Become abundant; increase rapidly
5: Breed freely and abundantly
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| Re: a comment on reflexion - dayspring to dusk by DreamerSupreme |
18-Sep-03/9:57 AM |
well, other than it appearing like kiddie scrawl at the start, whats wrong with it? the label "dreamer" has MANY meanings behind it, and leads to other interesting things.
your four year old niece could say that, sure, but would her saying it serve a purpose in any piece of writing what-so-ever?
what would you suggest?
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| Re: a comment on reflexion - dayspring to dusk (second version) by Don-Quixote |
18-Sep-03/9:52 AM |
there might be a few more rewrites, the original has been.. well, mysterious. Im not sure what i intended it to mean/say when i wrote it, but i am unraveling it via rewrite, etc..
its strange when i start writing poems i dont fully comprehend, it always bugs me when i go back and go over such poems.
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| Re: a comment on reflexion - dayspring to dusk (second version) by Don-Quixote |
18-Sep-03/9:47 AM |
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almost irreverent? im a bit confused with that statement lol.
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| Re: Upside down and tigers by horus8 |
16-Sep-03/8:43 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Arm 'n' headin (Mr.Mexicacco) by suprembeaner |
12-Sep-03/11:18 PM |
THATS NICE! REALLY!! CLEVER!!!
Your my GOD.
REALLY.
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| Re: a comment on The Sinners Saloon by SupremeDreamer |
12-Sep-03/11:12 PM |
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too many people.. its a city in my brain.. and something creeping around, and im gonna die.. very soon.. i can sense it.. yes..
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| Re: a comment on Arm 'n' headin (Mr.Mexicacco) by suprembeaner |
12-Sep-03/11:00 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Arm 'n' headin (Mr.Mexicacco) by suprembeaner |
12-Sep-03/10:59 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer |
12-Sep-03/10:47 PM |
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so, what have i done to earn the spanking session? hrmm?
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| Re: a comment on Arm 'n' headin (Mr.Mexicacco) by suprembeaner |
12-Sep-03/10:44 PM |
wait, nope.. unless your at your brothers house at the moment. hrmm? 24.126.113.154
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| Re: a comment on Arm 'n' headin (Mr.Mexicacco) by suprembeaner |
12-Sep-03/10:41 PM |
huh!?@? (captain, we have a malfunction)
your godswife? bah, and i thought darkie suddenly got creative, or it was horus, but this one came from the left field.
rankerville never fails to surprise me.
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| Re: a comment on Sugar Daddy (Free Curse) by Pystal Cocaine swifter than You. by Bachus |
4-Sep-03/12:22 AM |
METH IS BETTER. BITCH. FUCK COKE. SNORT SODA. DRINK A WARM MILKY COLODA, START UP THE TOYOTA, AND ILL SEE YA LATA LOSA.
FUCK COLUMBIAN DRUG PRODUCE!! METH IS AMERICAN MADE, SUBURBAN CHEMISTRY LAB APPROVED.
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| Re: a comment on The Banishment of Don Quixote by abecedarian |
3-Sep-03/10:38 AM |
z, i think we need to gather some comrades and smash abes head in. did you see his other poem? the computer mumbo jumbo? isnt that just filled with brilliance? aye? you, me, hatter, 3 people do not fully comprehend his message, we are lazy bastards z.. we are monkeys unable to grasp the mans genius..
he is so full of himself, that he wont discuss anything about his meaning, and im sure its an arrogant "you must figure it out yourself, i have laid it out there for you"
its denial of an extremely ignorant sort. dont you think? am i an arrogant shit who just seeks to ridicule him? am i so evil?
bah.
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| Re: a comment on The Banishment of Don Quixote by abecedarian |
3-Sep-03/10:33 AM |
yeah, sure, its layed in subtle veils. bullshit. you offer nothing to clue anyone in on what your trying to say.
its all just the readers being too lazy to figure it out abe.. isnt it? your a fruit boy that is not very succesful at selling his fruit, because theres so many other fruit sellers.. yeah, your self love and "im so brilliant" thought process has turned you into goo. i had this problem once too, i got my head caved in afterwards.
it was an unpleasant way to wake up.
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| Re: I'm going back to art school by TanHand |
3-Sep-03/9:03 AM |
Okay bored now, fuck this -dreamers creative response:
-Settle's Snake Song-
stroking penis isnt fun no more,
im feeling oh so sore,
cockhead foreskin rubbin has become a bore,
i need to go buy a motherfucking whore,
i want more,
than just my hand,
i want more than just my tanhand
strapped to my penis like a rubberband.
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heh. have fun at art school you bastage. heres an 8.
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| Re: Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme |
3-Sep-03/8:27 AM |
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I am damn fucking proud of myself. I think that this parody is the best one i have ever written.
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