| Re: Nightshades by Bachus |
28-Aug-03/3:53 AM |
I liked this.. one of these days i need to attack poetic forms.. btw horus, i was wondering if you knew a good website that listed the forms and had examples of how to make them. If you know a good place tell me.
blessed with 10.
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| Re: a comment on Picasso by DreamerSupreme |
28-Aug-03/3:23 AM |
Im going to post a complete analyization of his artwork in a poem soon. shall be posted asap.
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| Re: a comment on Picasso by DreamerSupreme |
28-Aug-03/3:17 AM |
Indeed, i printed this poem out and stuck it on my wall.
If i know my social info correctly, godswife is your sister, well, she threw some information about picasso and his habit of beating his women.. and since my current writing has been going slow, she inspired me.. including the idiot who needed to defend a dead painter.. so i decided "poetic justice.. heres something that the world can consider, whether ole picasso was a lover or a fighter or: just a plain sadistic bastard with a brush.
I hope the picasso lover felt cold hatred when reading this.. ;D
so, your gonna become a big hit i hear, or thats what you publicly predicted. aye?
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| Re: Picasso by DreamerSupreme |
27-Aug-03/6:46 PM |
Now, i have dishonored your beloved picasso.. now you can defend him, now you can give me a zero and have a good excuse.. NOW YOU CAN! ok?
now all can wonder about good ole picasso.
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| Re: a comment on By Now by Lie2MePinnochio |
27-Aug-03/6:20 PM |
1: art wasnt brought into it, you had to bring it into this, all i did was use picasso's way of painting as a usefull way to describe how the mans face looked like after being beaten silly.
2: who gives a shit if his genius is far greater than anything written? his art doesnt TELL ME ANYTHING either.. it showed something maybe, but what that is, i dunno, im not a painter.
3: my boxer poem wasnt sposed to tell you anything either. It wasnt written to tell you anything new, and poetry doesnt exist just to tell people things moron. maybe it was sposed to reveal the world of boxing maybe? wasnt the purpose either, but i can think of alot of bullshit to justify my poem.. but i wont, since thats silly.
I wrote it because i could, i wrote it because i love to write. THATS IT. and when some asshole comes in and gets all high and mighty because i mentioned picasso, and gives me a 4, i get pissed, because: you could of simply told me it sucked, gave me a 4, and not show your ignorance.
No, you had to defend picasso, as if i spray painted over one of his masterpieces..
and personally, his paintings dont reveal shit to me, and ive read a million things that to me are worth more than his paintings..
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| Re: a comment on The Boxer by DreamerSupreme |
27-Aug-03/6:11 PM |
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wasting your time? i dont think so. your comment was worth something, to me anyway. thank you.
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| Re: a comment on The Boxer by DreamerSupreme |
27-Aug-03/6:08 PM |
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hrmm.. isnt that ironic.. ;)
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| Re: Anna Kournikova (Pretense of Wesley Willis) by Lie2MePinnochio |
27-Aug-03/1:22 AM |
my recent attempt at being funny was more humorouse than this, and less retarded. it still sucked, but this makes it look good.
0. Does picasso approve?
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| Re: By Now by Lie2MePinnochio |
27-Aug-03/1:21 AM |
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whats this? rambling? funny. lets ask picasso.
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| Re: a comment on The Boxer by DreamerSupreme |
27-Aug-03/1:19 AM |
you are a fucking moron.. have you ever seen a picasso painting idiot??? eh? notice how the faces are uneven, all fucked up, out of place? hrmmm? AYE? picasso has nothing to do with this you idiot, its one of my unique ways of describing something you twit.. and you give me a low score because you THINK picasso was a lover, and not a fighter?
HOW do you know that btw? do you know picasso personally aye?
go rot in hell shitface.
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| Re: Robe Lowe, Me and Icecream by RO-B-LOWE ME PLEASE |
26-Aug-03/7:16 PM |
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| Re: Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz |
23-Aug-03/3:02 AM |
"I took a bite" really? did she kick you in the face afterwards? lol.
heres a 9.
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| Re: Trollop: A Married Mans Revenge by DreamerSupreme |
23-Aug-03/2:57 AM |
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I NEVER KNEW HOW FUN IT IS TO KILL TILL NOW! ITS FUCKING WONDERFULL! I FEEL LIKE A MILLION DOLLARS!
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| Re: Trollop: A Married Mans Revenge by DreamerSupreme |
23-Aug-03/2:56 AM |
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did Mr. Giggles like that? ;)
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| Re: Forget it...k? by psikosis |
21-Aug-03/7:47 AM |
Stay thee away.
nice one shakespear.. i really liked the ending, i think it was the best part of the whole poem.
heres a 2
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| Re: eyeh8LIEph by psikosis |
21-Aug-03/7:45 AM |
what the fuck are you babbling about?
"disguised by fate, brought together by immortal
suffering"
ok.. cute.. that really adds a cherry to the whole thing.. and your title is shit.
heres a 3
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| Re: a comment on quarter-step (abridged) by richa |
21-Aug-03/7:34 AM |
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well damn, cmon now, was my latest piece a lazy fart?.. ;/
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| Re: a comment on quarter-step (abridged) by richa |
21-Aug-03/7:02 AM |
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just say the truth: you like calling poets out. ;P
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| Re: a comment on The Belgian Bookworm [revised] by DreamerSupreme |
21-Aug-03/6:41 AM |
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aaaahhhh.. ok, ok. hrmm.. i like some of those suggestions.. mind if i grab some? or is that cheating?
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| Re: a comment on quarter-step (abridged) by richa |
21-Aug-03/5:36 AM |
ah.. ok, now i understand better.
Should consider ironing out the wrinkles though, or seeing how you could get your message across in a more clear fashion, but thats up to you.
Blessed with 8.
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