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Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
*beep* bleed, spread my seed the main purpose in being human. (bingo captain, state the obvious) these days i act crazy lurking around, doing the slim shady lost my hair dye, im donning blue overalls, deniggered californian ford pickup hillbilly lips puffin on the oversized herb philly -fuck!#$ i have revealed the truth: white boy with nigger afro with a forked tongue that does glow green, i now lean over to puke up my redneck moonshine on the carpet i did sign- *Puke Dream, boy made a man with 50 bucks spent on a star spangled whore, hair sprayed to defend against russian nukes* Phallus met flesh tube, dispensed toothpaste (colgate bitches, her teeth are pure aryan nazis) patted her iron hair piece, kicked her in the stomach and walked the fuck out, fifty spent, five hundred gained. i play the street stock market, in my pocket is my switch blade i deal and trade, steal secrets misinform everyone, and make millions off of mexican "norte 4 life" thugs welcome to the film directed by mr poet "im confused" and produced by his sidekick -delusions of grandeur- quote: I AM PICASSO I KNOW HOW TO FLOW With me paint brush I DID NOT RUSH those brush strokes BUT JUST HAPPEN TO LIKE deformed faces and handicapped women. [cut, smoke more, moon shine the sun, load the gun and end the crystalline waterfall called "my" mind]

Down the ladder: silent struggle

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.201706
Overall Rank: 4488
Posted: September 4, 2003 6:48 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2003 6:48 PM PDT
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[8] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 4-Sep-03/9:04 PM | Reply
you know, this is kinda fun. :) I like.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.179.229 > nentwined | 4-Sep-03/9:19 PM | Reply
I had fun writing it.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 4-Sep-03/9:23 PM | Reply
I bet you did.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.172.102 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 5-Sep-03/8:29 PM | Reply
temp meth insanity can result in many interesting artistic creations. ;)
[5] William Delacroix @ 206.116.186.109 | 4-Sep-03/10:48 PM | Reply
At least some parts of it made sense...I think.
[4] ==Doylum @ 80.225.182.20 | 5-Sep-03/7:29 AM | Reply
Are you the Pet Shop Boys?
[4] ==Doylum @ 80.225.182.20 > ==Doylum | 5-Sep-03/7:29 AM | Reply
Cos you look like them
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.172.102 > ==Doylum | 5-Sep-03/8:28 PM | Reply
are you a moron? looks like it.
[n/a] suprembeaner @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Sep-03/10:11 PM | Reply
best poem I've seen in a long time.

your my idol
[n/a] DreamerSupreme @ 66.81.156.139 > suprembeaner | 12-Sep-03/10:47 PM | Reply
so, what have i done to earn the spanking session? hrmm?
[9] TheVoiceless @ 206.72.7.6 | 13-Sep-03/1:20 AM | Reply
It was a fun read man. Looks like you had to have had a blast writing it. One of those that you sat there forever to write? Little by little, reading over, changing. Looking at the screen cockeyed wondering if it makes any sense.

Being messed up helps you write at times doesn't it?
[9] TheVoiceless @ 206.72.7.6 | 13-Sep-03/1:20 AM | Reply
It was a fun read man. Looks like you had to have had a blast writing it. One of those that you sat there forever to write? Little by little, reading over, changing. Looking at the screen cockeyed wondering if it makes any sense.

Being messed up helps you write at times doesn't it?
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