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The Sinners Saloon (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer Here I sit, head hung
in shame, next to father Patrick.
Irish bastard.. God loves him anyway.
"Give me Jesus on the rocks"
"Sweet or Sour?"
"Make that bastard bitter,
he shouldnt be sweet
for a sapless sinner
like me."
I slam the shots, eating
the divine bread served
like peanuts.
Feeling the forgiveness, I smile
and stumble out the bar
feeling better than when I first came in.
Up the ladder:
A Woman on a Bench Downtown
Down the ladder:
The Maguswolf
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Posted: September 12, 2003 4:59 PM PDT; Last modified: September 12, 2003 4:59 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.806824 Overall Rank: 1673 Comments:
Recommend an apostrophe for Sinners' Saloon-
(Saloon of Sinners)--what do you have against apostrophes? Good poem. 330 view(s)
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heh. :)