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A Woman on a Bench Downtown

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 May 2003 · 0 comments

Thin lips, the color of a broken heart, A single tear slowed at the tip of her nose, Debating the next step Before descending towards her crème colored shoes. I passed, pretending to defend my hair from The hot wind Whipping from around the large gray building. I lit a cigarette and turned the corner.

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