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A Woman on a Bench Downtown (Free verse) by baughworm
Thin lips, the color of a broken heart,
A single tear slowed at the tip of her nose,
Debating the next step
Before descending towards her crème colored shoes.
I passed, pretending to defend my hair from
The hot wind
Whipping from around the large gray building.
I lit a cigarette and turned the corner.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.806824
Overall Rank: 1672
Posted: May 18, 2003 9:56 PM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2003 9:56 PM PDT
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