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At First sight (Free verse) by Nirvana13666
Dark shadow of aggressiveness With your manipulative scent I look into to you only finding regret Lust is wicked Lust is vile My body trembled in your grasp My mind forgot my chosen path Speak to me Meet with me Lets us invoke what we both are missing Noting complicated Nothing overly thought about Your lips made my body sing Never once thinking of what my heart should feel I don’t love you I love your scent I don’t need anything but your physical strength So speak to me But be silent when facing the world I have everything to lose

Up the ladder: hells atrium
Down the ladder: MENSA's For Fags Like Me

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.7310586
Overall Rank: 11834
Posted: September 18, 2003 8:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2003 8:56 AM PDT
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Comments:
[1] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.68 | 18-Sep-03/9:15 AM | Reply
Dull.
[0] DreamerSupreme @ 66.81.150.187 | 18-Sep-03/12:24 PM | Reply
blah blah blah -- your ordinary off the wall bathroom stall scrawl.. *fart* 0
[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 19-Sep-03/1:51 PM | Reply
A Whitmanesque ode to estrangement and runny fluids.
[9] Furin @ 213.134.234.167 | 11-Jun-04/4:41 AM | Reply
deep but standart
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