At First sight (Free verse) by Nirvana13666
Dark shadow of aggressiveness
With your manipulative scent
I look into to you only finding regret
Lust is wicked
Lust is vile
My body trembled in your grasp
My mind forgot my chosen path
Speak to me
Meet with me
Lets us invoke what we both are missing
Noting complicated
Nothing overly thought about
Your lips made my body sing
Never once thinking of what my heart should feel
I donât love you
I love your scent
I donât need anything but your physical strength
So speak to me
But be silent when facing the world
I have everything to lose
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Weighted score: 4.7310586
Overall Rank: 11839
Posted: September 18, 2003 8:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2003 8:56 AM PDT
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