poemranker ::hells atrium by crwncka1

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Free verse № 62595

hells atrium

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Aug 2003 · 4 comments

below the concrete jungle, lost in deep darkness, in this land of freedom, stuck in a sewer, is where i am at, with no one around, I stay in agony, unable to find light, I so desperately need, to guide me out, of my chilling misery, each day rots away, my life a little more, I can't take it anymore, nothing seems to work, in this life of mine, I think of you, the one I love, it gives me hope, it takes me away, for just a moment, a see light flash, a way out of this, a way back to you, or was I just, dreaming all this up, in my mind once again

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4 comments

[4] Don-Quixote 28-Aug-03/10:43 AM Reply
... well, atleast the title was good.. but the poem severly disappointed me.. you didnt do your title justice.. luring me to read this wasnt cute, or a good joke.. bleh

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[n/a] crwncka1 28-Aug-03/1:49 PM Reply
sucker
[n/a] Y2kSlamPoet › crwncka1 28-Aug-03/4:33 PM Reply
yeah.. i fell for it.. heres a shit flavored cookie
[n/a] horus8 28-Aug-03/2:21 PM Reply
Let me guess... you are a lonely piece of poop look for a way back up and in. That's just brilliant 10 CHUDS FOR YOU.