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hells atrium (Free verse) by crwncka1
below the concrete jungle,
lost in deep darkness,
in this land of freedom,
stuck in a sewer,
is where i am at,
with no one around,
I stay in agony,
unable to find light,
I so desperately need,
to guide me out,
of my chilling misery,
each day rots away,
my life a little more,
I can't take it anymore,
nothing seems to work,
in this life of mine,
I think of you,
the one I love,
it gives me hope,
it takes me away,
for just a moment,
a see light flash,
a way out of this,
a way back to you,
or was I just,
dreaming all this up,
in my mind once again
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.7310586
Overall Rank: 11838
Posted: August 28, 2003 10:35 AM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2003 10:35 AM PDT
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