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hells atrium (Free verse) by crwncka1

below the concrete jungle, lost in deep darkness, in this land of freedom, stuck in a sewer, is where i am at, with no one around, I stay in agony, unable to find light, I so desperately need, to guide me out, of my chilling misery, each day rots away, my life a little more, I can't take it anymore, nothing seems to work, in this life of mine, I think of you, the one I love, it gives me hope, it takes me away, for just a moment, a see light flash, a way out of this, a way back to you, or was I just, dreaming all this up, in my mind once again

Don-Quixote 28-Aug-03/10:43 AM
... well, atleast the title was good.. but the poem severly disappointed me.. you didnt do your title justice.. luring me to read this wasnt cute, or a good joke.. bleh

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