poemranker ::20 most recent comments by DreamerSupreme (61-80) and replies

Comments byDreamerSupreme, 61–80 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Sweetart by Bachus 23 Nov 2003, 8:21 AM
Like a car: built to breakdown.
Blessed with eight.
replying on Trailer Park: Diary of a Hayseed by DreamerSupreme 8 Oct 2003, 1:09 AM
clerical errors? where?

replying on Dress rehearsal by INTRANSIT 6 Oct 2003, 2:07 PM
and yet you still crossdress.
replying on Dress rehearsal by INTRANSIT 6 Oct 2003, 2:01 PM
Stop it woman, have you no mind?
your beauty is revealed when you venture out in the nude!

A little vine crown, and less bashfulness, and youd be fit for eden.

but you ate the apple.
replying on Dress rehearsal by INTRANSIT 6 Oct 2003, 1:58 PM
well.. thats a good way to fart that wonderfull farmin metaphor into the stockade..

all you needed was a better title methought.. now its.. tsk.

anyway, im off to face my nightmare, known as a villanelle

on Dress rehearsal by INTRANSIT 6 Oct 2003, 1:07 PM
perhaps they thought those seeds would grow.

9.
replying on Roman Toes Power the Local Crushery by DreamerSupreme 5 Oct 2003, 9:31 AM
"enter"

:)
cherry popper
drink deep the pink wine
of them shiverin cream thighs.
would you be spontaneous and tell me its shit or

"i have turned you into a seven eyed toad"

etc.

cmon now, humor me.
replying on Roman Toes Power the Local Crushery by DreamerSupreme 4 Oct 2003, 5:28 AM
ah, thanks for pointing that out, correcting it.
on ocd by FreeFormFixation 4 Oct 2003, 4:20 AM
acne is a passing horror

dead flies are an interesting cure you have imagined up though

is it working yet?
I am the prophet that the rummies
worship with open jaws
begging for me to bleed
which occurs only when i decide
to shed three tears in rememberance
of the silly trinity
that belongs to christianity

i do enjoy teasing..hah.
replying on The Shu & Horus & Planet X by Shardik 21 Sep 2003, 7:02 AM
i know what pantheism is.

advertising is commonly retarded, and i do try hard to be funny in everyway possible.





replying on I hate your guts and think you're stupid by horus8 21 Sep 2003, 12:03 AM
the sick goto church
to be loved and left
burning.

what bitch gave birth
to you, brainsick canine
of misery?

on memories by ThePariahDog 20 Sep 2003, 11:17 PM
the rejected? hrmm. nice name.
replying on heaven's will by ThePariahDog 20 Sep 2003, 11:06 PM
Jesus and forgiveness did fade
but the sun still rises at dawn
and what was said gave life
is now what sucks spirit quick
from those that pray to it.

might you ask dark one
where has your soul gone?
replying on Shakespearean Sonnets & Poets by Y2kSlamPoet 20 Sep 2003, 10:32 PM
if i were to compare myself to shakespear
then i would really be an imbecile
deluded and blindly walking

its not possible to compare a beastly alien
to a skull pond'ring idiot of the old
x-mass decor and resurrected forgeries

and why the fuck do you waste time with such stupid curiosities?? it makes you look like old age finally turned your mind unsound, voiced with senile utterings.
replying on Shakespearean Sonnets & Poets by Y2kSlamPoet 20 Sep 2003, 9:50 PM
i wasnt comparing him to me, or anyone.

i simply voicing my dislike of his works, and dont get all ass-sore about it.


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I spoke of picasso with snakes tongue and slither
dont doubt - the adventures of shakespear[e] will be bitter
and force fed, intranasaly,
upsetting nose use to love powder sweet & sugary.
replying on Spider Meth Adventure by Y2kSlamPoet 20 Sep 2003, 9:40 PM
n00b. lmao. your a hoot darkie.
on Simple Can (Relic) by Liver by Shardik 20 Sep 2003, 9:23 PM
and whats worse is his self pity
whining like some toddler
that i wish to beat silly

child protection laws and the knights
of respected dead farts be damned
i fucking wish the bastards bullshit
was self-respectfuly sealed and canned.
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Blessed with 10, as usual horus- your eyesight is sharp and misses little or nothing.