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Some follow marchers- others take time to understand it. (Other) by SupremeDreamer
Leaders- what leaders? there are many princes, knights dark angels- poets that know it jesters and dreamers and much more, an endless ladder of warrior poets along with many meek court loiterers that exist within warring factions. there was a time when the meek were honored reformers- yet blood is still a favored paint. my father said that it was blessed- revered even by those that do not paint with it What is one of the central pillars of a poets work? perhaps expelling the concept of BLACK & WHITE? (im a rainbow wizard with a pointy gray hat) No one asked you to change but i only offered a tip: make use of anything in a intelligent fashion and you wont be the one who loses. perhaps your wings are white- im accustomed to ebony halos, but emotion doesnt hold precedence over calm musings- since emotions have no eyes or feet but an abudant supply of lips in motion. ------------------ [btw- im quite out of character.. sometimes i get tired of pounding things into skulls, and realize some little delicate skinned creatures need patient explaination- that or im in a mood to really go through such a process..or im getting soft.. or your "special". >insert other options here<]

Up the ladder: The Bridge
Down the ladder: My love for Katie

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.2384057
Overall Rank: 4086
Posted: October 3, 2003 10:57 PM PDT; Last modified: October 4, 2003 5:47 AM PDT
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[8] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ | 4-Oct-03/5:04 AM | Reply
"is still is a favored paint." one too many is'

"but have an abudant supply" lose the have.

Oh, and i'm pleased to see you finally mellowing out. You'll have plenty of time to kill later, once it all builds up again like it always does.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 4-Oct-03/5:46 AM | Reply
I-I cap'

[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 4-Oct-03/5:49 AM | Reply
the overflowing pot drowned my cooking fire
and the the weather emptied its bladder
then i had to kill squirrels with rocks
now i have discovered that i have no matches

-nod- my time to wait
and dance for lightning.
[n/a] poetandknowit @ | 4-Oct-03/7:37 PM | Reply
Lovely. And such original thinking.
[n/a] DreamerSupreme @ > poetandknowit | 5-Oct-03/6:44 AM | Reply
would you be spontaneous and tell me its shit or

"i have turned you into a seven eyed toad"


cmon now, humor me.
[8] Jill Stockinger @ | 2-Jan-21/5:50 PM | Reply
great line: "blood is still a favored paint"
accidental typo in abundant, the "n" was dropped
need an apostrophe in won't-and in poet's in "a poet's work" and in i'm (i'm accustomed)
might be stronger to leave poets out of the first stanza since they are such a strong element in the second stanza. I liked "rainbow wizard in a pointy hat- very cute! Liked this overall, appreciated the point made...
excellent line: emotions abundant supply of lips in motion
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