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My love for Katie (Free verse) by Stephen Robins Katie,
Fellate me.
Up the ladder:
Some follow marchers- others take time to understand it.
Down the ladder:
Milkman's Eyes
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Posted: October 6, 2003 8:07 AM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2003 8:07 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2384057 Overall Rank: 4088 Comments:
I am appalled by your verbosity. Your work is weighed down with superfluous verbiage. You will never get Katie to fellate you at this rate.
Your chances of succeeding in this respect are about as high as your chances of being requested by Max Clifford to assist a premiership football team in spit-roasting a 17 year old Catholic schoolgirl in the bedroom of a luxury hotel.
Amen.
If you are a stranger making lewd comments about a young katie, then you are disgusting.
If she is your sister or something, I guess it is OK 340 view(s)
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where is dear katie?
have you got her in a false-closet with a non-functioning toilet? again?