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Dress rehearsal (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Oh why is it you work me so you ask of me and then say no tossing choices to and fro all this for an opinion?

Up the ladder: Charter Of Rights
Down the ladder: Drinking and driving

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10537
Posted: October 6, 2003 1:00 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2003 1:44 PM PDT
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[9] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.171.68 | 6-Oct-03/1:07 PM | Reply
perhaps they thought those seeds would grow.

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[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > DreamerSupreme | 6-Oct-03/1:58 PM | Reply
THOSE seeds are growing just fine. this is about 20 clothes changes just to get out the damn door.
[9] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.171.68 > INTRANSIT | 6-Oct-03/2:01 PM | Reply
Stop it woman, have you no mind?
your beauty is revealed when you venture out in the nude!

A little vine crown, and less bashfulness, and youd be fit for eden.

but you ate the apple.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > DreamerSupreme | 6-Oct-03/2:04 PM | Reply
yes, I ate the apple. and grew a penis.
[9] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.171.68 > INTRANSIT | 6-Oct-03/2:07 PM | Reply
and yet you still crossdress.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > DreamerSupreme | 6-Oct-03/2:18 PM | Reply
if you are calling me a woman, i shall take it as a compliment.
[n/a] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.170.8 > INTRANSIT | 6-Oct-03/3:39 PM | Reply
"dress rehearsa"

i did not title it.. ;P
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 6-Oct-03/1:37 PM | Reply
syntax can be important, you know.
amusing rhymes. but no vote.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > <~> | 6-Oct-03/1:46 PM | Reply
is syntax inclusive of punctuation. i imagine so. neat. now it's cheap and meaningless. but proper.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > INTRANSIT | 6-Oct-03/1:48 PM | Reply
way to go cowboy.

ignore me.

i suck today.
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > <~> | 6-Oct-03/1:50 PM | Reply
get a fresh bottle and drink, then. why must everything be so difficult?
[9] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.171.68 > INTRANSIT | 6-Oct-03/1:58 PM | Reply
well.. thats a good way to fart that wonderfull farmin metaphor into the stockade..

all you needed was a better title methought.. now its.. tsk.

anyway, im off to face my nightmare, known as a villanelle

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