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Dress rehearsal

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Oct 2003 · Edited 6 Oct 2003 · 12 comments

Oh why is it you work me so you ask of me and then say no tossing choices to and fro all this for an opinion?

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[9] DreamerSupreme 6-Oct-03/1:07 PM Reply
perhaps they thought those seeds would grow.

9.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › DreamerSupreme 6-Oct-03/1:58 PM Reply
THOSE seeds are growing just fine. this is about 20 clothes changes just to get out the damn door.
[9] DreamerSupreme › INTRANSIT 6-Oct-03/2:01 PM Reply
Stop it woman, have you no mind?
your beauty is revealed when you venture out in the nude!

A little vine crown, and less bashfulness, and youd be fit for eden.

but you ate the apple.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › DreamerSupreme 6-Oct-03/2:04 PM Reply
yes, I ate the apple. and grew a penis.
[9] DreamerSupreme › INTRANSIT 6-Oct-03/2:07 PM Reply
and yet you still crossdress.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › DreamerSupreme 6-Oct-03/2:18 PM Reply
if you are calling me a woman, i shall take it as a compliment.
[n/a] Don-Quixote › INTRANSIT 6-Oct-03/3:39 PM Reply
"dress rehearsa"

i did not title it.. ;P
[n/a] <~> 6-Oct-03/1:37 PM Reply
syntax can be important, you know.
amusing rhymes. but no vote.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <~> 6-Oct-03/1:46 PM Reply
is syntax inclusive of punctuation. i imagine so. neat. now it's cheap and meaningless. but proper.
[n/a] <~> › INTRANSIT 6-Oct-03/1:48 PM Reply
way to go cowboy.

ignore me.

i suck today.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <~> 6-Oct-03/1:50 PM Reply
get a fresh bottle and drink, then. why must everything be so difficult?
[9] DreamerSupreme › INTRANSIT 6-Oct-03/1:58 PM Reply
well.. thats a good way to fart that wonderfull farmin metaphor into the stockade..

all you needed was a better title methought.. now its.. tsk.

anyway, im off to face my nightmare, known as a villanelle