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Dress rehearsal (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Oh why is it you work me so you ask of me and then say no tossing choices to and fro all this for an opinion?

DreamerSupreme 6-Oct-03/2:01 PM
Stop it woman, have you no mind?
your beauty is revealed when you venture out in the nude!

A little vine crown, and less bashfulness, and youd be fit for eden.

but you ate the apple.




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