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heaven's will (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
the sun is golden today alchemical rays wash us clean of speech, freedom, thought it's heaven's will to destroy all minds


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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8336
Posted: September 20, 2003 9:44 PM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2003 9:44 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 61.219.65.81 | 20-Sep-03/9:58 PM | Reply
Jesus died for you.
[n/a] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.172.249 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 20-Sep-03/11:06 PM | Reply
Jesus and forgiveness did fade
but the sun still rises at dawn
and what was said gave life
is now what sucks spirit quick
from those that pray to it.

might you ask dark one
where has your soul gone?
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