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heaven's will

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Sep 2003 · 2 comments

the sun is golden today alchemical rays wash us clean of speech, freedom, thought it's heaven's will to destroy all minds

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20-Sep-03/9:58 PM Reply

Jesus died for you.

[n/a] DreamerSupreme › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20-Sep-03/11:06 PM Reply

Jesus and forgiveness did fade
but the sun still rises at dawn
and what was said gave life
is now what sucks spirit quick
from those that pray to it.

might you ask dark one
where has your soul gone?