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heaven's will (Free verse) by ThePariahDog

the sun is golden today alchemical rays wash us clean of speech, freedom, thought it's heaven's will to destroy all minds

DreamerSupreme 20-Sep-03/11:06 PM
Jesus and forgiveness did fade
but the sun still rises at dawn
and what was said gave life
is now what sucks spirit quick
from those that pray to it.

might you ask dark one
where has your soul gone?




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