replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 7:29 PM
The above was a reply to INTRANSIT btw.
replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 7:28 PM
means he was unsure of the spelling.
replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 7:27 PM
Oh, and did you let out enough steam'n frustration?
You know, my father was a truck driver when he was sixteen up until around twenty-eight or so before he took basic asm classes..
He ended up working for Amdahl and IBM later on.. and he never passed the 8th grade. (Not bad for a rough neck trucker eh?)
Does it really matter that your truckin' the usa? Your pushin it to the max either way..
And time is a funny son of a bitch. Honestly.
You know, my father was a truck driver when he was sixteen up until around twenty-eight or so before he took basic asm classes..
He ended up working for Amdahl and IBM later on.. and he never passed the 8th grade. (Not bad for a rough neck trucker eh?)
Does it really matter that your truckin' the usa? Your pushin it to the max either way..
And time is a funny son of a bitch. Honestly.
replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 7:19 PM
Actually, I was reading his work before I snatched my notebook and started writing this exercise. (bastards a bit long-winded, but his work gets my juices boiling either way)
replying on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry
7 Jan 2004, 7:14 PM
Well everyone has their ways of growing poetically..
but I figure aslong as one keeps reading poetry
and writes consistently progress will follow
depending on the poet.. adapt or die?
I love that saying, maybe we should
sell flags with that motto right here
at the poemranker alms store.
but I figure aslong as one keeps reading poetry
and writes consistently progress will follow
depending on the poet.. adapt or die?
I love that saying, maybe we should
sell flags with that motto right here
at the poemranker alms store.
replying on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme
7 Jan 2004, 6:55 PM
Its a thought stream, so its supposed to have oddities... (one of my writers block exercises)
Didn't really consider touching it up,
but where else do you think I should tweak'n meliorate?
Didn't really consider touching it up,
but where else do you think I should tweak'n meliorate?
on Black Beach by Caducus
7 Jan 2004, 2:13 PM
Great work caducus, twas a good read. Nine.
on godhead by ThePariahDog
17 Dec 2003, 2:48 PM
Lovely.. I love it. 10! oh wait, I forgot to give my blessing!
oh well.
oh well.
on An Ode to Gobbling by horus8
28 Nov 2003, 10:48 PM
Well, reminds me of my mother.. drunk and attempting to knife my father.
Blessed with eight.
Blessed with eight.
on Holding on for Jesus by Everyone
26 Nov 2003, 5:22 PM
Me? Bumping into a Voodoo Priest changed everything.
replying on Pinches by peaceseeker
26 Nov 2003, 4:03 PM
Whats the point of insulting a dodo bird?
replying on Pinches by peaceseeker
26 Nov 2003, 4:00 PM
Relax. All he did was suggest line-breaks so that it could be more readable, and less jumbled? And you got anal over it.
replying on Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik
26 Nov 2003, 3:43 PM
Three days actually. Whats with you and using the old methhead comebacks? I was only performing my jester act damn you. Are you trying to push the Welbutrin & Prozac with free samples of Xanax & Valium?
on My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485
26 Nov 2003, 2:04 PM
so wear this zero with pride.
replying on Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik
26 Nov 2003, 1:49 PM
Oh goddamn it, thats below the belt you bastage.
Let me inform that I've slept a full 6 hours this morning before the folks next door starting pounding hammers at 10 am.
Let me inform that I've slept a full 6 hours this morning before the folks next door starting pounding hammers at 10 am.
replying on Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik
26 Nov 2003, 1:26 PM
Yes sir.. do forgive my impudence- I am unworthy.
replying on Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik
26 Nov 2003, 1:18 PM
Only the ones that follow the art of haiku- I myself have only just been saved, and given a new name signaling my death- and the birth of the shit crumpet, which allowed my rebirth to occur.
on Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik
26 Nov 2003, 1:07 PM
I feel so inadequate now to speak of Mr. Haiku.
He wants me to say that he smiles on you
and your little haiku children.
Blessed with 10.
He wants me to say that he smiles on you
and your little haiku children.
Blessed with 10.
on From Womb To Wood by Caducus
26 Nov 2003, 1:02 PM
Very moving stuff. 9.
replying on Mr. Haiku showed up at my door- so I by Shit-Crumpets
26 Nov 2003, 12:58 PM
Mr. Haiku came to me, alot like an epiphany late during the night, and said:
"Lee? WHY HAVE YOU DISRESPECTED ME, MR. HAIKU?"
I was held by fear, and didnt answer. Then he said:
"I will forgive you never-the-less, and be the blade of your redemption. YOU MUST SPEAK OF MR. HAIKU AND THE ART OF NINJA!"
Which is why my minions have unleashed their minds and unveiled these lines of 575 in great numbers preaching the fists of haiku and lotus.
"Lee? WHY HAVE YOU DISRESPECTED ME, MR. HAIKU?"
I was held by fear, and didnt answer. Then he said:
"I will forgive you never-the-less, and be the blade of your redemption. YOU MUST SPEAK OF MR. HAIKU AND THE ART OF NINJA!"
Which is why my minions have unleashed their minds and unveiled these lines of 575 in great numbers preaching the fists of haiku and lotus.