Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/7:29 PM
The above was a reply to INTRANSIT btw.
Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/7:28 PM
means he was unsure of the spelling.
Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/7:27 PM
Oh, and did you let out enough steam'n frustration? You know, my father was a truck driver when he was sixteen up until around twenty-eight or so before he took basic asm classes.. He ended up working for Amdahl and IBM later on.. and he never passed the 8th grade. (Not bad for a rough neck trucker eh?) Does it really matter that your truckin' the usa? Your pushin it to the max either way.. And time is a funny son of a bitch. Honestly.
Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/7:19 PM
Actually, I was reading his work before I snatched my notebook and started writing this exercise. (bastards a bit long-winded, but his work gets my juices boiling either way)
Re: a comment on Down The Hall by Blindpoetry	7-Jan-04/7:14 PM
Well everyone has their ways of growing poetically.. but I figure aslong as one keeps reading poetry and writes consistently progress will follow depending on the poet.. adapt or die? I love that saying, maybe we should sell flags with that motto right here at the poemranker alms store.
Re: a comment on Vietnamese Dog Steaks by DreamerSupreme	7-Jan-04/6:55 PM
Its a thought stream, so its supposed to have oddities... (one of my writers block exercises) Didn't really consider touching it up, but where else do you think I should tweak'n meliorate?
Re: Black Beach by Caducus	7-Jan-04/2:13 PM
Great work caducus, twas a good read. Nine.
Re: godhead by ThePariahDog	17-Dec-03/2:48 PM
Lovely.. I love it. 10! oh wait, I forgot to give my blessing! oh well.
Re: An Ode to Gobbling by horus8	28-Nov-03/10:48 PM
Well, reminds me of my mother.. drunk and attempting to knife my father. Blessed with eight.
Re: Holding on for Jesus by Everyone	26-Nov-03/5:22 PM
Me? Bumping into a Voodoo Priest changed everything.
Re: a comment on Pinches by peaceseeker	26-Nov-03/4:03 PM
Whats the point of insulting a dodo bird?
Re: a comment on Pinches by peaceseeker	26-Nov-03/4:00 PM
Relax. All he did was suggest line-breaks so that it could be more readable, and less jumbled? And you got anal over it.
Re: a comment on Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik	26-Nov-03/3:43 PM
Three days actually. Whats with you and using the old methhead comebacks? I was only performing my jester act damn you. Are you trying to push the Welbutrin & Prozac with free samples of Xanax & Valium?
Re: My Love Letter by ShaNoN+960317485	26-Nov-03/2:04 PM
so wear this zero with pride.
Re: a comment on Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik	26-Nov-03/1:49 PM
Oh goddamn it, thats below the belt you bastage. Let me inform that I've slept a full 6 hours this morning before the folks next door starting pounding hammers at 10 am.
Re: a comment on Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik	26-Nov-03/1:26 PM
Yes sir.. do forgive my impudence- I am unworthy.
Re: a comment on Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik	26-Nov-03/1:18 PM
Only the ones that follow the art of haiku- I myself have only just been saved, and given a new name signaling my death- and the birth of the shit crumpet, which allowed my rebirth to occur.
Re: Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war by Shardik	26-Nov-03/1:07 PM
I feel so inadequate now to speak of Mr. Haiku. He wants me to say that he smiles on you and your little haiku children. Blessed with 10.
Re: From Womb To Wood by Caducus	26-Nov-03/1:02 PM
Very moving stuff. 9.
Re: a comment on Mr. Haiku showed up at my door- so I by Shit-Crumpets	26-Nov-03/12:58 PM
Mr. Haiku came to me, alot like an epiphany late during the night, and said: "Lee? WHY HAVE YOU DISRESPECTED ME, MR. HAIKU?" I was held by fear, and didnt answer. Then he said: "I will forgive you never-the-less, and be the blade of your redemption. YOU MUST SPEAK OF MR. HAIKU AND THE ART OF NINJA!" Which is why my minions have unleashed their minds and unveiled these lines of 575 in great numbers preaching the fists of haiku and lotus.