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godhead (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
new misogynistic hatred springs forth from the altar worship my deity breathe the chemical imbalance and choke on my godhead you, who are meager you, who are my servants you emaciated bitches

Up the ladder: being human
Down the ladder: take it easy

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2543
Posted: December 17, 2003 2:36 PM PST; Last modified: December 17, 2003 2:36 PM PST
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[10] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.170.134 | 17-Dec-03/2:48 PM | Reply
Lovely.. I love it. 10! oh wait, I forgot to give my blessing!

oh well.
[9] darby pyn @ 198.81.26.106 > DreamerSupreme | 17-Dec-03/11:36 PM | Reply
Brutal and exact. very nice. 9
[9] daniella @ 24.232.82.153 | 28-Feb-04/8:01 PM | Reply
there you go... gettin down and gritty
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