Poemranker [Poem: Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war] [by Shardik] Thu Nov 21 05:58:58 PST 2024

[10] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.170.78 | 26-Nov-03/1:07 PM | Reply

I feel so inadequate now to speak of Mr. Haiku.
He wants me to say that he smiles on you
and your little haiku children.

Blessed with 10.

[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 > DreamerSupreme | 26-Nov-03/1:11 PM | Reply

Awe shucks, I bet you say that to all of the sailors.

[10] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.170.78 > Shardik | 26-Nov-03/1:18 PM | Reply

Only the ones that follow the art of haiku- I myself have only just been saved, and given a new name signaling my death- and the birth of the shit crumpet, which allowed my rebirth to occur.

[n/a] Shit-Crumpets @ 204.31.170.78 > DreamerSupreme | 26-Nov-03/1:23 PM | Reply

you hapless little minion... come now and brush your teeth- you can use my old toothbrush, I've bought a new one.

Be thankful that I even allow you to clean your teeth, and don't dare beg for mouthwash.

[10] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.170.78 > Shit-Crumpets | 26-Nov-03/1:26 PM | Reply

Yes sir.. do forgive my impudence- I am unworthy.

[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 > DreamerSupreme | 26-Nov-03/1:41 PM | Reply

Sleep will often keep one from chiding themselves.

[10] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.170.78 > Shardik | 26-Nov-03/1:49 PM | Reply

Oh goddamn it, thats below the belt you bastage.

Let me inform that I've slept a full 6 hours this morning before the folks next door starting pounding hammers at 10 am.

[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 > DreamerSupreme | 26-Nov-03/3:19 PM | Reply

What, 6 hours in one week?

[10] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.180.252 > Shardik | 26-Nov-03/3:43 PM | Reply

Three days actually. Whats with you and using the old methhead comebacks? I was only performing my jester act damn you. Are you trying to push the Welbutrin & Prozac with free samples of Xanax & Valium?

[10] Caducus @ 195.92.168.166 | 26-Nov-03/3:50 PM | Reply

Haiku? Who cares it shines like snow man ....10 and a personal favourite of mine.