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Achilles, Mothers, and the Gods of war (Free verse) by Shardik

Look me in my eyes when you tell me you love me. Gods, and Mothers lie. Baptised in the Styx, love will hang you by your heels in Greek tragedies.

Shit-Crumpets 26-Nov-03/1:23 PM
you hapless little minion... come now and brush your teeth- you can use my old toothbrush, I've bought a new one.

Be thankful that I even allow you to clean your teeth, and don't dare beg for mouthwash.




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