Re: Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	16-Feb-07/11:31 AM
I'll take a Guiness, you pig! Cute. But doesn't do it for me. Minus a point for not having "fish" as per rockmage. Extra point for the word "Gortices".
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Feb-07/11:32 AM
cherry blossom and wood, with a midnight encounter? clever, but they play against each other somewhat comically--or maybe that's just my mood. Gyring? Kudos if you actually meant it. Good "round and round and round". Overall, too plain. Carry the metaphors through?
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Feb-07/1:44 PM
I can't but help think that's not where it ends. But definitely you've captured something. I want it to wrap back on itself, somehow, be less just two contrasting slices.
Re: DIDN'T I SAY by massangel62	19-Feb-07/3:51 PM
Maybe you have different definitions of love. It's a sentiment, but doesn't do so well as a poem.
Re: My Love by tgheidi	19-Feb-07/3:52 PM
points for rhyming "eyes" and "explodes". Your love sounds awfully post-apocalyptic.
Re: A Mothers Heart by TAMARAG67	19-Feb-07/3:52 PM
ack
Re: IT All Starts With My Fears by tisa7	19-Feb-07/3:53 PM
A list of your fears might be more interesting.
Re: An Arrow and a Knife by blues	19-Feb-07/3:54 PM
interesting.
Re: A Dance by D. $ Fontera	19-Feb-07/3:55 PM
cute; I can't quite make sense of it but I like what's there.
Re: The Reason by frdup717	19-Feb-07/3:55 PM
ow.
Re: Coward has a tail by LintyWeenis	19-Feb-07/4:01 PM
cute. :)
Re: Night High by LintyWeenis	19-Feb-07/4:02 PM
very interesting. nice flow, too.
Re: The Plague of Being by D. $ Fontera	19-Feb-07/4:03 PM
eh
Re: Cold Feet by gregsamsa222	19-Feb-07/4:04 PM
I really like this.
Re: Alone by frdup717	19-Feb-07/4:05 PM
quick rhymes. trite poem.
Re: I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62	19-Feb-07/4:14 PM
die die die
Re: Lying in the Snow, Crazy? Yes. by D. $ Fontera	19-Feb-07/4:15 PM
hmm.
Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717	19-Feb-07/4:16 PM
Maybe a nice quick lyric.
Re: the one by crystal4	20-Feb-07/12:25 PM
nope
Re: The exile returns by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	22-Feb-07/11:10 AM
Welcome back. :)