A Mothers Heart

Member since 2004 · Posted 23 Jul 2004 · 4 comments

My precious little ones-how I truly adore you. There you are , so engrossed in your own limited existance and I am longing for you to stay as innocent as you are now-as innocent as I once was. The feel of your cheek against mine and the warm baby softness of you overwhelm my senses. Love washes over me like virgin ocean waves crashing on sandy beaches at the dawn of time. You are perfection. Bliss. I know in time I shall have to loosen the arms I hold tightly around you-resistance is futile- but, until that time I will savor each caress, each smile, each laugh and file them away to memory, in a place only a mother knows.

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[4] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 23-Jul-04/5:57 PM Reply

I think the idea of filing something away would make a good smutty inuendo. Apart fromt that, tedious.

[5] Dovina 23-Jul-04/6:52 PM Reply

Good thought, but too cliche. Could use some banter between baby and adult.

[n/a] TAMARAG67 24-Jul-04/9:51 PM Reply

thanks dan- its nice to know someone gets it

[1] nentwined 19-Feb-07/3:52 PM Reply

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