Poemranker [Poem: This God of mine] [by Bobjim] Thu Nov 21 03:32:02 PST 2024

This God of mine (Free verse) by Bobjim

I have a God who's close to me, A God that no one else can see. Yet as I travel here and there, This God of mine is everywhere. A powerful God is not for me, Just one we'll meet eventually. My God allows us all to grow, By reaping only what we sow. Far gentler than the lightest breeze, That flutters leaves high in the trees, This God of mine I recommend, This God of mine to you I lend forever.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10813

Posted: December 19, 2004 1:19 PM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2004 1:19 PM PST
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[2] auscot @ 138.130.92.116 | 20-Dec-04/6:34 PM | Reply

I'm not into borrowing Gods. I worship the great outdoors and this wonderful world, which evolved over time for us to live in and enjoy.

[8] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 > auscot | 5-Mar-06/10:37 AM | Reply

You wouldn't have made a good Roman.
The last stanza's pretty good, actually.

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