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This God of mine (Free verse) by Bobjim

I have a God who's close to me, A God that no one else can see. Yet as I travel here and there, This God of mine is everywhere. A powerful God is not for me, Just one we'll meet eventually. My God allows us all to grow, By reaping only what we sow. Far gentler than the lightest breeze, That flutters leaves high in the trees, This God of mine I recommend, This God of mine to you I lend forever.

Ranger 5-Mar-06/10:37 AM
You wouldn't have made a good Roman.
The last stanza's pretty good, actually.




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