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Now I'm with you (Free verse) by Roisin My own arms are warmer.
Up the ladder:
the birds are bugs
Down the ladder:
A Mothers Heart
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Posted: April 25, 2004 4:42 PM PDT; Last modified: April 25, 2004 4:42 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.833116 Overall Rank: 10808 Comments:
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25-Apr-04/7:02 PM
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So?
A nice sentiment, and perhaps strongly felt - but too easy.
The most minimalist poem in the world. (except for the one that goes 'I am'). Excellent.
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