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i hate everything about you! (Free verse) by da_bitch
i hate everything you said i hate everytime you asked me out i hate everytime you told me you loved me i hate everytime you looked at me i hate everything you talked about i hate everytime you got mad at me over nothing i hate everyone of your friends i hate everytime you held my hand i hate everytime you tryed to kiss me but i pulled away i hate everytime you told my friends to tell me things i hate everytime you told your friends that you hate me i hate every little thing about you but....... i love you

Up the ladder: Cat you cat
Down the ladder: the birds are bugs

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10806
Posted: March 10, 2004 12:15 PM PST; Last modified: March 10, 2004 12:15 PM PST
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Comments:
[4] kawakurdi @ 195.93.33.11 | 10-Mar-04/2:55 PM | Reply
You must be mad!
[8] ga_writer @ 162.40.236.187 | 10-Mar-04/6:30 PM | Reply
I know what you're saying and i know where you're coming from.
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