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My Love (Free verse) by tgheidi
A windswept breeze from time gone by From out of the shadows I saw my knight You touched my hand and no words were uttered You looked deep in my soul there is no other They key to our passion is in our eyes The moon ignites and the sun explodes The love I hold Is like no other For the love we make is our begining Even though it's been two decades The love that was is the love that is There shall be no other

Up the ladder: the solitary tree
Down the ladder: ex-beetle

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8489
Posted: August 31, 2004 8:08 PM PDT; Last modified: August 31, 2004 8:08 PM PDT
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[4] nentwined @ 76.167.62.172 | 19-Feb-07/3:52 PM | Reply
points for rhyming "eyes" and "explodes".

Your love sounds awfully post-apocalyptic.
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