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An Arrow and a Knife (Free verse) by blues
A bow and arrow shot through my heart The feeling made me warm Then you took that arrow out and replaced it with a knife in my back The feeling made me sick Sick of knowing that an arrow once shot through my heart That first feeling, was never mutual.
Up the ladder: i love this shit
Down the ladder: I WANT TO BE THE PRESIDENT!
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.857143
Weighted score: 4.96158
Overall Rank: 8537
Posted: November 2, 2004 3:53 PM PST; Last modified: November 2, 2004 3:53 PM PST
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Comments:
[6] sliver @ 63.189.16.170 | 2-Nov-04/8:52 PM | Reply
Guess it didn't work out huh? Move on man, there's more to life. Much.
[5] wilco @ 4.226.153.210 | 3-Nov-04/6:49 PM | Reply
sorry
[5] nentwined @ 76.167.62.172 | 19-Feb-07/3:54 PM | Reply
interesting.
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