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An Arrow and a Knife (Free verse) by blues A bow and arrow
shot through my heart
The feeling made me warm
Then you took that arrow out
and replaced it with a knife
in my back
The feeling made me sick
Sick of knowing that an arrow
once shot through my heart
That first feeling,
was never mutual.
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Posted: November 2, 2004 3:53 PM PST; Last modified: November 2, 2004 3:53 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.96158 Overall Rank: 8539 Comments:
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sliver @ 63.189.16.170
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2-Nov-04/8:52 PM
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Guess it didn't work out huh? Move on man, there's more to life. Much.
sorry
interesting.
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