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An Arrow and a Knife

by blues

Member since 2004 · Posted 2 Nov 2004 · 3 comments

A bow and arrow shot through my heart The feeling made me warm Then you took that arrow out and replaced it with a knife in my back The feeling made me sick Sick of knowing that an arrow once shot through my heart That first feeling, was never mutual.

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[6] sliver 2-Nov-04/8:52 PM Reply
Guess it didn't work out huh? Move on man, there's more to life. Much.
[5] wilco 3-Nov-04/6:49 PM Reply
sorry
[5] nentwined 19-Feb-07/3:54 PM Reply
interesting.