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An Arrow and a Knife (Free verse) by blues

A bow and arrow shot through my heart The feeling made me warm Then you took that arrow out and replaced it with a knife in my back The feeling made me sick Sick of knowing that an arrow once shot through my heart That first feeling, was never mutual.

nentwined 19-Feb-07/3:54 PM
interesting.




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