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the one (Free verse) by crystal4 i have found someone
and he might be the one
but he doesnt know
but it will show
the way i felt
made my heart melt
he is so fine
be blows my mind
he is co cute
its hard to boot
if he breaks my heart
i will fall apart
is he the one
or another someone?
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52 card pickup (only a test)
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Posted: March 9, 2005 5:45 PM PST; Last modified: March 9, 2005 5:45 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8410625 Overall Rank: 10698 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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crystal4 @ 65.32.226.123
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13-Mar-05/11:48 AM
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This was how I felt about my ex boyfriend.
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 82.39.21.223
> crystal4
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13-Mar-05/12:51 PM
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This is excelent work, i know how u feel lol!!1 -10-
nope
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