Re: Getting Ahead by Jill Stockinger	22-Jan-21/5:15 PM
love it :)
Re: a comment on the product of repetition by nentwined	30-Dec-20/11:55 AM
Yeah, the lack of specificity in the poem makes it not stick to the wall quite as well, asking the reader to fill that in/explore. All or any of the above.
Re: the product of repetition by nentwined	29-Dec-20/11:52 AM
https://madewithcollab.com/collab/W00k80w00h1
Re: a comment on Nadine by nentwined	16-Dec-20/7:21 PM
This may be the alcohol speaking (reasons) but thank you. I love your poetry group, and thank you. :)
Re: a comment on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined	16-Dec-20/3:15 PM
Revisiting to try a new thing. Reading it out, I stumbled in a few places. Also adjusting for timing... Do I edit this into oblivion or make a v3 that is its own thing? === paint me a picture with countable stanzas, colors that rhyme directly and slant, paint me the lines that twist their own language, that form a new form when rendered as chant, paint me a picture that makes its own being, make it sing loudly the chords of the soul and paint it again, and again, and again. === https://www.facebook.com/kaolinfire/posts/10158680724377199
Re: a comment on Nadine by nentwined	16-Dec-20/3:01 PM
Not wrong at all, gone too soon.
Re: Sunrise at McDonalds by Dovina	4-Dec-20/4:13 PM
Feels a little clipped to me in places (first two lines set a cadence for me that I then trip on line three). I like the second view, definitely think it adds something. Though perhaps it would be less on the nose using the word "palm"?
Re: for John by pete	3-Dec-20/3:34 PM
I kind of want to hear this out loud, ranted on stage, maybe with some jazz behind it. I don't know how well it holds up for me for re-reading, I don't feel like it "wraps up" for me? but maybe it doesn't need to. I really want it to wrap up more, though.
Re: Sea Foam by groogirl	2-Dec-20/2:34 PM
Are you the sea foam? Can that be merged with the jester? I don't feel the mixing of metaphors as they stand, but maybe that could be embraced more somehow?
Re: a comment on Due by impert&ent	2-Dec-20/2:07 PM
Just repaired comment-emails (who knows when they broke?), so that may help some small amount.
Re: a comment on I'll start by nentwined	2-Dec-20/10:27 AM
Maybe fixed? https://stackoverflow.com/questions/8186395/noclassdeffounderror-javax-activation-datasource javax.activation was removed from Java9 forwards, so I had to include it manually.
Re: a comment on I'll start by nentwined	2-Dec-20/10:21 AM
ARGH. Yes. Yes, right.
Re: a comment on Fragmental by Bill Z Bub	11-Nov-20/3:26 PM
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Re: Fragmental by Bill Z Bub	11-Nov-20/3:25 PM
well that's a new error
Re: Fragmental by Bill Z Bub	11-Nov-20/3:25 PM
*hugs* here and there and anywhere.
Re: a comment on Days of Silence (1-196) by impert&ent	11-Nov-20/3:23 PM
O_O
Re: Lovesick by impert&ent	11-Nov-20/3:22 PM
Hah, yes.
Re: Firewoman by Richard	11-Nov-20/3:22 PM
Too much cliche in word choice makes it hard for me to involve myself in reading the poem. I believe there's a lot of emotion in this, but it doesn't translate/transfer to me.
Re: Due by impert&ent	11-Nov-20/3:20 PM
I may just be out of practice, but I love this.
Re: Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp	23-Apr-20/3:24 PM
Torn between 6 and 2. Going with 2.