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the product of repetition (Free verse) by nentwined
The product of repetition is not always the end— The product of repetition changes the doer, the context, the answer, or even the question. The product of repetition is not always the end. The product of repetition.

Up the ladder: Whore of Babylon
Down the ladder: Behind Closed Doors

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.1185646
Overall Rank: 5965
Posted: December 29, 2020 11:37 AM PST; Last modified: December 29, 2020 11:37 AM PST
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[n/a] nentwined @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 29-Dec-20/11:52 AM | Reply
https://madewithcollab.com/collab/W00k80w00h1
[7] Dovina @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 29-Dec-20/2:11 PM | Reply
Judging from link link in your comment, I think that repetition in your poem refers to musical repetition. Otherwise, I would be drawn to assembly lines or women who don't listen and simply repeat themselves. And what is the product of the musical repetition? You don't say.

Frost says, "and many miles before I sleep"
"and many miles before I sleep"
and that works for me.
It changes the doer, revises his attitude.
[n/a] nentwined @ 127.0.0.1 > Dovina | 30-Dec-20/11:55 AM | Reply
Yeah, the lack of specificity in the poem makes it not stick to the wall quite as well, asking the reader to fill that in/explore.

All or any of the above.
[8] Jill Stockinger @ 127.0.0.1 | 29-Dec-20/4:22 PM | Reply
Cutesy. I see this poem as "a product of repetition".
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