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the product of repetition

by nentwined

Member since 2001 · Posted 29 Dec 2020 · 4 comments

The product of repetition is not always the end— The product of repetition changes the doer, the context, the answer, or even the question. The product of repetition is not always the end. The product of repetition.

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[n/a] nentwined 29-Dec-20/11:52 AM Reply
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[7] Dovina 29-Dec-20/2:11 PM Reply
Judging from link link in your comment, I think that repetition in your poem refers to musical repetition. Otherwise, I would be drawn to assembly lines or women who don't listen and simply repeat themselves. And what is the product of the musical repetition? You don't say.

Frost says, "and many miles before I sleep"
"and many miles before I sleep"
and that works for me.
It changes the doer, revises his attitude.
[n/a] nentwined › Dovina 30-Dec-20/11:55 AM Reply
Yeah, the lack of specificity in the poem makes it not stick to the wall quite as well, asking the reader to fill that in/explore.

All or any of the above.
[8] Jill Stockinger 29-Dec-20/4:22 PM Reply
Cutesy. I see this poem as "a product of repetition".