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the product of repetition (Free verse) by nentwined The product of repetition
is not always the end—
The product of repetition
changes the doer, the context,
the answer, or even the question.
The product of repetition
is not always the end.
The product of repetition.
Up the ladder:
Whore of Babylon
Down the ladder:
Cockroaches
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Posted: December 29, 2020 11:37 AM PST; Last modified: December 29, 2020 11:37 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.1185646 Overall Rank: 5968 Comments:
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29-Dec-20/11:52 AM
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Judging from link link in your comment, I think that repetition in your poem refers to musical repetition. Otherwise, I would be drawn to assembly lines or women who don't listen and simply repeat themselves. And what is the product of the musical repetition? You don't say.
Frost says, "and many miles before I sleep" "and many miles before I sleep" and that works for me. It changes the doer, revises his attitude.
Cutesy. I see this poem as "a product of repetition".
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