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The Equalizer (Free verse) by Skamper
When judgement day is here and we find we have to face the dividers put in place of the human race - those who walk with god…(or chosen deity) make their way - humbly - secretly basking in knowledge they knew best and of those who walk with satan…(or chosen demon) those that stray - mumble - how they didn’t know that life was just a test When judgement day is here and we are so rudely awoken the Gods have finally spoken we each have our token those who walk with god…(or chosen deity) bask in all his glory - openly - thankful for Sundays spent with prayers and those who walk with satan…(or chosen demon) now feel a little sorry - openly - regretting Sundays spent with players When judgement day is here and someone… (chosen deity or demon) asks of us - who wants cake - let me tell you… we all do

Up the ladder: Again with the venting
Down the ladder: Behind Closed Doors

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.1185646
Overall Rank: 5972
Posted: June 5, 2007 2:28 PM PDT; Last modified: June 5, 2007 2:28 PM PDT
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[5] lmp @ 141.154.134.3 | 5-Jun-07/3:04 PM | Reply
meh. sounds like something that i read about (Philosopher's quandry or something like that):

safer to believe in god just in case there is a heaven.

[n/a] Skamper @ 202.6.130.223 > lmp | 7-Jun-07/3:35 PM | Reply
don't really know much about the quandries philosophers get themselves into, but your comment about god indicates you missed the point.
[5] lmp @ 141.154.134.3 > Skamper | 28-Jun-07/4:08 PM | Reply
ok
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