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the product of repetition
(
Free verse
) by
nentwined
The product of repetition is not always the end— The product of repetition changes the doer, the context, the answer, or even the question. The product of repetition is not always the end. The product of repetition.
Dovina
29-Dec-20/2:11 PM
Judging from link link in your comment, I think that repetition in your poem refers to musical repetition. Otherwise, I would be drawn to assembly lines or women who don't listen and simply repeat themselves. And what is the product of the musical repetition? You don't say.
Frost says, "and many miles before I sleep"
"and many miles before I sleep"
and that works for me.
It changes the doer, revises his attitude.
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