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Due (Free verse) by impert&ent
. are we due think another I poem of end four days the years three At and wound open an Of ourselves stitching are We skin the together pulling Sutures across other that each bloody Facing mess your hand in hand his in hand in in mine together My hers pulling

Up the ladder: Dylan's Odyssey.
Down the ladder: Bodies Bore Like I Do Too

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6269
Posted: November 6, 2020 4:56 PM PST; Last modified: November 6, 2020 4:56 PM PST
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[10] nentwined @ 127.0.0.1 | 11-Nov-20/3:20 PM | Reply
I may just be out of practice, but I love this.
[n/a] impert&ent @ 127.0.0.1 > nentwined | 12-Nov-20/1:11 AM | Reply
Chuffed! Am still debating with myself over the form.
Am just as glad that I'm not the only one stopping by.
[10] nentwined @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 > impert&ent | 2-Dec-20/2:07 PM | Reply
Just repaired comment-emails (who knows when they broke?), so that may help some small amount.
[5] Dovina @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 19-Nov-20/12:03 PM | Reply
I find the form confusing.
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