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Due

by impert&ent

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Nov 2020 · 4 comments

. are we due think another I poem of end four days the years three At and wound open an Of ourselves stitching are We skin the together pulling Sutures across other that each bloody Facing mess your hand in hand his in hand in in mine together My hers pulling

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4 comments

[10] nentwined 11-Nov-20/3:20 PM Reply
I may just be out of practice, but I love this.
[n/a] impert&ent › nentwined 12-Nov-20/1:11 AM Reply
Chuffed! Am still debating with myself over the form.
Am just as glad that I'm not the only one stopping by.
[10] nentwined › impert&ent 2-Dec-20/2:07 PM Reply
Just repaired comment-emails (who knows when they broke?), so that may help some small amount.
[5] Dovina 19-Nov-20/12:03 PM Reply
I find the form confusing.