Re: coming out by pete	23-Apr-20/3:23 PM
cute :)
Re: Everybody's Gone by impert&ent	23-Apr-20/3:21 PM
damn. nailed it for me right now.
Re: Lazy Pindaric Ode Blues by pete	23-Apr-20/3:19 PM
definitely spoken.
Re: a comment on A terzanelle on the subject of the moment by Adriaan	23-Apr-20/3:10 PM
^this :)
Re: a comment on protest chant by nypoet22	23-Apr-20/3:09 PM
Just make sure all food is well cooked! ;) [I only darkly jest] Interestingly, ... corporations /are/ dying of the plague....
Re: Year of the Cucumber by Dovina	23-Apr-20/3:07 PM
I stumbled a little at "feel"/"feel with"... flows better without to me. (why wallah vs. voila? If you were a cucumber? :) ) "no wanderlust" might be "no lust for wander"? More food for thought than I expected.
Re: Birb by Aetius	23-Apr-20/3:00 PM
Poignant. I think I've been that bird.
Re: Weather poem 13b by nypoet22	23-Apr-20/2:59 PM
I sure don't know. 13b?
Re: a comment on bitrot by nentwined	21-Apr-20/11:34 AM
👍
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp	1-Nov-17/10:51 AM
I love you. :)
Re: a comment on Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp	1-Nov-17/10:36 AM
It's a failure of the poem or myself, I don't care which. For me, this critique.
Re: Sense {non} by Skamper	30-Jan-15/1:39 PM
the second stanza is your poem. drop the rest. maybe explore that more, or maybe don't. 6 for the poem as whole.
Re: The Spell(Alice part I) by alvinb	30-Jan-15/1:36 PM
I really like the potential of the first two stanzas, but the rest disappoints, for me—give me more color, more shifting, more playing with vision (other than bright/dark). Though loss poems are particularly hard to do, in that the general doesn't connect and the particular may be too particular. And they are done, and done, and done--but try to dig into more senses, cohere it all, and don't give up....
Re: Some of us by daniella	30-Jan-15/1:31 PM
cute :)
Re: Untitled Future by ARTIE	30-Jan-15/1:30 PM
I like how it leaves me hanging, but that's all that strikes me....
Re: Pakistan school massacre by Dhanesh M Kumar	30-Jan-15/1:30 PM
some nice images (or well-coined/well-conveyed), but doesn't really work for me as a poem.
Re: Bill of Rights on A4 by T. Jonathron Remp	30-Jan-15/1:28 PM
not following...nice flow/sounds.
Re: A mag that PAYS??? by SupremeDreamer	30-Jan-15/1:27 PM
It paid semi-pro rates regardless; the "if it sells" was the long-tail dream of icing on the cake.
Re: One Fine Day by ARTIE	30-Jan-15/1:26 PM
good luck!
Re: Why we're here by ARTIE	30-Jan-15/1:25 PM
Consciousness exists to destroy itself—from pain to pleasure, to make the pain go away—and retreat back to the nothingness from whence it came.