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Untitled Future (Free verse) by ARTIE Take my hand and walk with me
Through our multitude of dreams
Together, we shall see
Up the ladder:
Inside the house of dreams
Down the ladder:
Prelude to Infidelity (edited)
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Posted: June 17, 2004 10:18 AM PDT; Last modified: December 8, 2014 11:35 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.905148 Overall Rank: 9791 Comments:
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nentwined @ 127.0.0.1
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30-Jan-15/1:30 PM
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I like how it leaves me hanging, but that's all that strikes me....
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