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Among The Stars (Free verse) by ARTIE
When you feel your heart talking, and you can't foretell what it has to say, cast your eyes to the stars, upon that velvet way, and if a shooting star should turn the night sky to day, walk with me, far and away.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9792
Posted: November 11, 2014 2:52 PM PST; Last modified: April 7, 2015 8:11 PM PDT
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[3] Y2kSlamPoet @ ::1 | 13-Apr-15/4:06 PM | Reply
My heart speaks not.
It pulses with pulsars
while drinkin' at the bar
Goes cold while I'm hot
'n encourages me
to take another shot
till the last thing I see
is the blasted stars.
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