Re: THE MASTER by ARTIE	30-Jan-15/1:23 PM
interesting idea, but I'm not feeling it.
Re: SUCH IS THE LOSS I FEEL by ARTIE	30-Jan-15/1:21 PM
This feels like you're writing from the heart, trying to find the words to make it more universal...but the effect for me is just that's it's more generic/bland. The T'was feels affected, and [broken] stands out in an odd way as you're not playing with/using punctuation anywhere else....
Re: Sponds Hill, Cheshire, 26 December 2013 by Nicholas Jones	26-Jun-14/8:10 AM
Thirteen years? Poemranker's been here...yes, for thirteen years. Wow. I love a lot of this. Don't have enough mind left to say whether I love all of it or not.
Re: wall flower by Freethinker1602	11-Mar-13/1:41 AM
Cute, in that it dances around the subject...but it does so so repetitiously! So repetitiously. As if it were repeating itself, verse after verse, saying the same thing. This needs to say something else, too, or instead. Try some specifics. Make us care about this character, in particular (or make the dance itself more interesting, but even then, it should be more personal).
Re: Pandora's Box by Edna Sweetlove	10-Mar-13/10:10 PM
nice finish, but the strokes up there were a bit unschooled—and if that was the point it's too meta for me. ;)
Re: a comment on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!	10-Mar-13/10:02 PM
Am I spoiled by facebook? I want to "like" this comment. *shudder*
Re: a comment on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!	10-Mar-13/9:58 PM
I'd call it satire of some middling order. On its own merits, it's middling; satire elevates it a touch, but only a touch...and rated within satire's bounds, it's still just middling at best. Not to say I didn't enjoy bits of it, presuming satire. But still....
Re: a comment on Max's Poems by nentwined	25-Sep-12/8:27 PM
Shameless. :) Erm; erum. Perhaps? Perhaps, perhaps, per*klunk*.
Re: a comment on Max's Poems by nentwined	22-Jun-12/4:02 PM
Rockmage's—you can "search inside". Pictures of his art too, and I did a small handful of illustrations. :)
Re: a comment on Max's Poems by nentwined	22-Jun-12/3:58 PM
Yup :)
Re: Counting by Dovina	22-Jun-12/3:49 PM
I think "grave" is out of place (even though I'm sure you intended that, I think it's the wrong out of place, at that point?) It's a lot of fun, a good one, but I want to trim it, slightly, find it a cadence (or a different one). Like.
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	22-Jun-12/3:46 PM
I wonder if cafe press offers those....
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	22-Jun-12/3:43 PM
The lights go out But the server runs Alone, its cycles Over-clocked The packets never come.
Re: Help! by Dovina	22-Jun-12/3:42 PM
Makes me think we need youtube-style "reply-poems". HMMMM.
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	14-Sep-11/12:46 PM
Don't really know "and all". I presume the dark angel contingent graduated. I fell out of phase, and then got more serious about poetry (and trying to get paid for it, which precluded posting anything to poemranker). And maybe it's just too bogged down, maybe the voting (ranking?) needs some other scale measure, ... probably things that are more recent should get precedence in terms of what get shown. Got some free google advertising money today, tossing half of it at poemranker to see if anything happens.
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	14-Sep-11/12:09 PM
depends on the time of day, or how far the collective stick-up-ass is. senryu... or sure. I'd leave a high vote on it. Ah, the end of the world....
Re: Help! by Dovina	14-Sep-11/11:19 AM
Classy!
Re: a comment on Poemranker is Back! by Dovina	14-Sep-11/11:18 AM
hmm. it looks like that wasn't me. I hope that wasn't me. ah, the intricacies and confuse-ancies of poemranker... ;)
Re: Dashes of Deers can Hears by T. Jonathron Remp	14-Sep-11/10:47 AM
the rhyming! I'm blinded by the rhyming!
Re: David & Derrick by TheModestKing	6-Jun-11/6:52 PM
sad