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Free verse № 160215

A terzanelle on the subject of the moment

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Mar 2020 · 2 comments

This is how we fall: Not with a bang; with a run into a wall. This is how we hang: not together, not with a bang. Death is forever. We die alone, not together. We try to atone, we watch the news. We die alone. We express our views. No matter how we try, we watch the news. This is how we die, no matter how we try. This is how we fall: with a run into a wall

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[7] Dovina 21-Apr-20/10:42 AM Reply
Not fond of the form. 7 for handling it and for saying something.
[7] nentwined › Dovina 23-Apr-20/3:10 PM Reply
^this :)