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A terzanelle on the subject of the moment (Free verse) by Adriaan
This is how we fall: Not with a bang; with a run into a wall. This is how we hang: not together, not with a bang. Death is forever. We die alone, not together. We try to atone, we watch the news. We die alone. We express our views. No matter how we try, we watch the news. This is how we die, no matter how we try. This is how we fall: with a run into a wall

Up the ladder: Pledge
Down the ladder: none

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7764
Posted: March 13, 2020 3:10 PM PDT; Last modified: March 13, 2020 3:10 PM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ ::1 | 21-Apr-20/10:42 AM | Reply
Not fond of the form. 7 for handling it and for saying something.
[7] nentwined @ 127.0.0.1 > Dovina | 23-Apr-20/3:10 PM | Reply
^this :)
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