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One Fine Day (Free verse) by ARTIE "I read a story the other day
about a girl
who suffered deeply inside
from something
so personal
it seemed to destroy her will
to withstand
to interact
to feel what others about her endorsed.
And then one fine day
she awoke from a dream
with such an enlightened smile
and realized
that her fears were unjust
because
all her friends were there
for her."
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Posted: November 20, 2014 2:47 PM PST; Last modified: January 1, 2015 10:58 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8577223 Overall Rank: 10433 Comments:
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nentwined @ 127.0.0.1
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30-Jan-15/1:26 PM
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good luck!
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