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Sense {non} (Free verse) by Skamper
If hearts can be pounding,
chasing blood to outer reaches-
how can legs now feel so weak..
-and tell me-
where does the aching
-go-
when your hand brushes past
the wetness of my cheek
If questions were never shared
and hearts always spared?
Would the pain be directed
or somewhat deflected
by the ice
residing in my veins
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6954
Posted: April 20, 2014 12:52 AM PDT; Last modified: April 20, 2014 12:52 AM PDT
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