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bitrot (Free verse) by nentwined technology forgets itself
trudging ever onwards in
a relay race of development
whine, bits moan
forgotten on a server
existing only
when observed
the lens darker
every year
heat decay of the univers-
al microcosm
Up the ladder:
The Grand Adjustment
Down the ladder:
Nameless Stranger (a rensaku)
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Posted: April 21, 2020 10:10 AM PDT; Last modified: April 21, 2020 10:10 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.397343 Overall Rank: 3185 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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Dovina @ 127.0.0.1
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21-Apr-20/10:27 AM
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Thanks for keeping this forgotten place open and for giving me a lift.
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nentwined @ ::1
> Dovina
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21-Apr-20/11:34 AM
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bothered by line "bits moan"- rest is really good!
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