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bitrot (Free verse) by nentwined

technology forgets itself trudging ever onwards in a relay race of development whine, bits moan forgotten on a server existing only when observed the lens darker every year heat decay of the univers- al microcosm

Jill Stockinger 26-Dec-20/6:17 PM
bothered by line "bits moan"- rest is really good!




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