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Some of us

by daniella

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Sep 2014 · 4 comments

Some of us pound out a poem using rhythm and structure, breaking up lines and rhymes so to fit in the palm of the hand. The ticky tackiness of a poem can stick to the ribs and under your nails, be clear to rub out the wordiness so what is left is a bite-size portion. Go swallow the adverbs and don't choke on the nouns, pray spit out the punctuations, so you need not floss after reading.

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4 comments

[6] nentwined 30-Jan-15/1:31 PM Reply
cute :)
[n/a] daniella › nentwined 22-Feb-15/7:19 AM Reply
thank you :)
where are all the good people?
[6] Y2kSlamPoet › daniella 13-Apr-15/4:02 PM Reply
In hell drinkin' with the devil babe, that's where.
[6] Y2kSlamPoet 13-Apr-15/4:01 PM Reply
I'll give you a ten if you can condense this into a haiku. :P