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Some of us (Free verse) by daniella
Some of us pound out a poem using rhythm and structure, breaking up lines and rhymes so to fit in the palm of the hand. The ticky tackiness of a poem can stick to the ribs and under your nails, be clear to rub out the wordiness so what is left is a bite-size portion. Go swallow the adverbs and don't choke on the nouns, pray spit out the punctuations, so you need not floss after reading.

Up the ladder: joy22williams@yahoo.in
Down the ladder: Morning Maid

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6867
Posted: September 14, 2014 6:13 PM PDT; Last modified: September 14, 2014 6:13 PM PDT
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[6] nentwined @ 127.0.0.1 | 30-Jan-15/1:31 PM | Reply
cute :)
[n/a] daniella @ 127.0.0.1 > nentwined | 22-Feb-15/7:19 AM | Reply
thank you :)
where are all the good people?
[6] Y2kSlamPoet @ ::1 > daniella | 13-Apr-15/4:02 PM | Reply
In hell drinkin' with the devil babe, that's where.
[6] Y2kSlamPoet @ 127.0.0.1 | 13-Apr-15/4:01 PM | Reply
I'll give you a ten if you can condense this into a haiku. :P
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