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Some of us (Free verse) by daniella
Some of us pound out a poem
using rhythm and structure,
breaking up lines and rhymes
so to fit in the palm of the hand.
The ticky tackiness of a poem
can stick to the ribs and under your nails,
be clear to rub out the wordiness
so what is left is a bite-size portion.
Go swallow the adverbs
and don't choke on the nouns,
pray spit out the punctuations,
so you need not floss after reading.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6913
Posted: September 14, 2014 6:13 PM PDT; Last modified: September 14, 2014 6:13 PM PDT
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where are all the good people?