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Some of us (Free verse) by daniella

Some of us pound out a poem using rhythm and structure, breaking up lines and rhymes so to fit in the palm of the hand. The ticky tackiness of a poem can stick to the ribs and under your nails, be clear to rub out the wordiness so what is left is a bite-size portion. Go swallow the adverbs and don't choke on the nouns, pray spit out the punctuations, so you need not floss after reading.

daniella 22-Feb-15/7:19 AM
thank you :)
where are all the good people?




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