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Pakistan school massacre (Free verse) by Dhanesh M Kumar
Camouflaged in human sheath, They came, The torch – bearers of Devil’s darkness, Shredding the bullets of their own mothers’ milk. How could those naysayers forget that, Children are God’s most sacred gift to mankind.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5117
Posted: December 17, 2014 6:31 PM PST; Last modified: December 17, 2014 6:31 PM PST
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[10] T. Jonathron Remp @ 127.0.0.1 | 23-Dec-14/9:50 AM | Reply
pretty good
[2] nentwined @ ::1 | 30-Jan-15/1:30 PM | Reply
some nice images (or well-coined/well-conveyed), but doesn't really work for me as a poem.
[7] daniella @ 127.0.0.1 | 22-Feb-15/7:21 AM | Reply
there is a lot of feeling and outrage and sadness that is begging poetic justice in this poem
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