Pakistan school massacre

Member since 2006 · Posted 17 Dec 2014 · 3 comments

Camouflaged in human sheath, They came, The torch – bearers of Devil’s darkness, Shredding the bullets of their own mothers’ milk. How could those naysayers forget that, Children are God’s most sacred gift to mankind.

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[10] T. Jonathron Remp 23-Dec-14/9:50 AM Reply

pretty good

[2] nentwined 30-Jan-15/1:30 PM Reply

some nice images (or well-coined/well-conveyed), but doesn't really work for me as a poem.

[7] daniella 22-Feb-15/7:21 AM Reply

there is a lot of feeling and outrage and sadness that is begging poetic justice in this poem