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Pakistan school massacre (Free verse) by Dhanesh M Kumar

Camouflaged in human sheath, They came, The torch – bearers of Devil’s darkness, Shredding the bullets of their own mothers’ milk. How could those naysayers forget that, Children are God’s most sacred gift to mankind.

nentwined 30-Jan-15/1:30 PM
some nice images (or well-coined/well-conveyed), but doesn't really work for me as a poem.




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