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Lovesick (Free verse) by impert&ent
Headpsin / Talespin Odysseus never had to contend with a whirlpool and a siren at the same time. chasing myself ouroubouroubourou the turntable is on repeat the needle tracks my arm and swings only to pivot and return The tale is the same spinning myself round a hole in the middle Or is it at the end I never get to This is tail spin that lovesick feeling of having been here before, singing my own siren song that she knows nothing of. How did I get myself into this?

Up the ladder: Fireflies
Down the ladder: Ally McBeal

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5444
Posted: July 7, 2020 3:31 PM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2020 3:31 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] nentwined @ 127.0.0.1 | 11-Nov-20/3:22 PM | Reply
Hah, yes.
[n/a] Dovina @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 19-Nov-20/11:48 AM | Reply
I know something of. But not all of. It's why I never criticize you.
[n/a] impert&ent @ 127.0.0.1 | 20-Nov-20/2:40 PM | Reply
She's an icthyologist.
With a flick of the tale, she's off.
Fin
[8] Jill Stockinger @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 26-Dec-20/6:11 PM | Reply
Cute!
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