poemranker ::Can you beLIEve? by T. Jonathron Remp

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Can you beLIEve?

Member since 2004 · Posted 30 Sep 2008 · 2 comments

Wizard trophy mnemonics, the height of modern day ebonix The top of the lobbyist's tonics, The chronological sonic rockets, Enchanted lantern antics take Gerald by storm. By Norm, the invasion seeps Raisin Brand into German Society in a back handed, Barack-handed branded tactic The moon landing had to have happened or the moon men would not have lasted Bread, water, diaper plastic, the last of the velvet mastiffs, the tract of the optic chiasma The case for plasma, the wrench and my aunt named Lambda

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[8] Celticai 1-Oct-08/3:43 PM Reply
A political politiked commentary on today and the presidential campaign... your word choices create an interesting fluidity to the reading.
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp › Celticai 12-Dec-16/12:17 PM Reply
I disagree with your diseased commentary