on Outhouse by newagepoet2000
14 Nov 2003, 10:53 AM
675? Close enough I guess.
blessed with 4.
Oh, and not to be rude.. but your nick makes mine seem smashin, really- I can't keep from giggling everytime I read "new age poet" since the first thought that pops up in my head is: "whats that? virgin hippies meet MDMA+pantheism?"
No offense intended, just being liberal with my opinion.
blessed with 4.
Oh, and not to be rude.. but your nick makes mine seem smashin, really- I can't keep from giggling everytime I read "new age poet" since the first thought that pops up in my head is: "whats that? virgin hippies meet MDMA+pantheism?"
No offense intended, just being liberal with my opinion.
on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined
14 Nov 2003, 3:06 AM
I love it. really, i do.
10.
10.
replying on Inane Muttering by Don-Quixote
14 Nov 2003, 3:03 AM
Well, its the first one i wrote that didnt need a second draft afterwards.
course, some months later ill look at it again and will probably
spot something that bothers me..
course, some months later ill look at it again and will probably
spot something that bothers me..
on Those weeks I slit my wrists to the Smiths by Jeremi B. Handrinos
14 Nov 2003, 2:41 AM
well, not too bad, not the best you could have done though.
Blessed with 8.
Blessed with 8.
on Something I Hope I Would Not Hear Myself Speak by Lifeboatman
14 Nov 2003, 2:30 AM
long time, no see- ive missed your works, and enjoyed this one- even though its pencrap to you.
bust seats- slightly confusing, but i understand what you mean, i hope: empty seats? (bust- adj, lacking funds?)
well anyway, heres an 8.
bust seats- slightly confusing, but i understand what you mean, i hope: empty seats? (bust- adj, lacking funds?)
well anyway, heres an 8.
replying on Phonecall from zombies on Uranus by Y2kSlamPoet
9 Nov 2003, 6:44 PM
I dont make lightbulb pipes late at night. I have a headshop oilbase pipe, so I dont need to, specially since it has lasted me 4-5 or so months. Best 10 dollars I ever spent.
replying on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer
9 Nov 2003, 6:38 PM
Honestly? that you that you seem to not understand that it isn't "people" i dont want to know think of my personal writes- ITS YOU.
If someone else wanted to say something bad- then fine, but not you. You have irritated me to a point, that i really don't want to hear it anymore... yes, your that annoying, and you comment on pieces like this just to annoy me- meaning YOUR input is worthless.
thats what i think, shithead- and thats the TRUTH- not what you think it is, the real truth.
REPEAT: this is about YOU- not anyother ranker here-so get that in your miniscule brain.
If someone else wanted to say something bad- then fine, but not you. You have irritated me to a point, that i really don't want to hear it anymore... yes, your that annoying, and you comment on pieces like this just to annoy me- meaning YOUR input is worthless.
thats what i think, shithead- and thats the TRUTH- not what you think it is, the real truth.
REPEAT: this is about YOU- not anyother ranker here-so get that in your miniscule brain.
on Love (pyramus and thisbe) by New Life Drug
8 Nov 2003, 11:11 PM
Blessed with 6.
on take me home by New Life Drug
8 Nov 2003, 11:09 PM
You know what that means?
Gills are next on your "need to get" list. Blessed with seven- btw, you mix well with my meth injection.
Gills are next on your "need to get" list. Blessed with seven- btw, you mix well with my meth injection.
replying on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer
8 Nov 2003, 7:03 PM
sandpaper.. damn it, you always have a foot ahead of me: sandpaper it is.
replying on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer
8 Nov 2003, 6:59 PM
well, you gave me an idea:
What do you think about "Sand reminds me of your ashes" ?
What do you think about "Sand reminds me of your ashes" ?
replying on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer
8 Nov 2003, 6:56 PM
Well, thats why i asked for help. :/
The other title wont do:
He was a swimmer, and he didn't like boats.
The other title wont do:
He was a swimmer, and he didn't like boats.
on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer
8 Nov 2003, 6:47 PM
I just couldnt resist.. plus today I didn't feel like making a sonnet- I've become addicted to the vilanelle.
on Greybie Blue by abecedarian
8 Nov 2003, 4:45 PM
polyamorist isnt in my dictionary.. exactly what does it mean?
Aside from that, I bless you with 7.
Aside from that, I bless you with 7.
on an early discovery (reworking) by richa
8 Nov 2003, 4:42 PM
Pity the trees that stoop- 10.
on Givin' in by Freethinker1602
8 Nov 2003, 4:32 PM
I said that once, but then I got a nine inch nail in me bumcheeck and quickly got up.
Last Days become another Beginning, and fate was written with a pencil- get yourself JesusCream - White Out Made To Erase Sin!! (Gods Pen belongs to me, sorry-I stole that and his Buddha Joint)
heres a 6.
Last Days become another Beginning, and fate was written with a pencil- get yourself JesusCream - White Out Made To Erase Sin!! (Gods Pen belongs to me, sorry-I stole that and his Buddha Joint)
heres a 6.
on The lasts of Joe by Freethinker1602
8 Nov 2003, 4:26 PM
Hide? Grow nut hair and give her a kiss already.
Blessed with 4.
Blessed with 4.
replying on The lasts of Joe by Freethinker1602
8 Nov 2003, 4:24 PM
A girlie gave him a lil hug'n'kiss, and he found out that he wasnt evil, just seriously loaded on the 120 proof Denial&Sour-Grape Vermouth.
Some gremlins still have a fur coat in their secret closet.
Some gremlins still have a fur coat in their secret closet.
replying on Whispering (Zero Atmosphere) by Y2kSlamPoet
8 Nov 2003, 7:50 AM
the word shroom is used and you automaticaly assume the topic is actually about shroomin- you crack me up.
I dont know much, if anything, about haikus (other than 575-) so I couldnt spot a pimple haiku if it was growing on my nose, sorry for my ignorance.
Never said you were gay or liked the smiths?- defensive today?