| Re: a comment on Those weeks I slit my wrists to the Smiths by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
14-Nov-03/12:28 PM |
Ah.. how am I sposed to know that?
I dont know much, if anything, about haikus (other than 575-) so I couldnt spot a pimple haiku if it was growing on my nose, sorry for my ignorance.
Never said you were gay or liked the smiths?- defensive today?
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| Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000 |
14-Nov-03/10:53 AM |
675? Close enough I guess.
blessed with 4.
Oh, and not to be rude.. but your nick makes mine seem smashin, really- I can't keep from giggling everytime I read "new age poet" since the first thought that pops up in my head is: "whats that? virgin hippies meet MDMA+pantheism?"
No offense intended, just being liberal with my opinion.
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| Re: paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined |
14-Nov-03/3:06 AM |
I love it. really, i do.
10.
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| Re: a comment on Inane Muttering by Don-Quixote |
14-Nov-03/3:03 AM |
Well, its the first one i wrote that didnt need a second draft afterwards.
course, some months later ill look at it again and will probably
spot something that bothers me..
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| Re: Those weeks I slit my wrists to the Smiths by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
14-Nov-03/2:41 AM |
well, not too bad, not the best you could have done though.
Blessed with 8.
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| Re: Something I Hope I Would Not Hear Myself Speak by Lifeboatman |
14-Nov-03/2:30 AM |
long time, no see- ive missed your works, and enjoyed this one- even though its pencrap to you.
bust seats- slightly confusing, but i understand what you mean, i hope: empty seats? (bust- adj, lacking funds?)
well anyway, heres an 8.
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| Re: a comment on Phonecall from zombies on Uranus by Y2kSlamPoet |
9-Nov-03/6:44 PM |
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I dont make lightbulb pipes late at night. I have a headshop oilbase pipe, so I dont need to, specially since it has lasted me 4-5 or so months. Best 10 dollars I ever spent.
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| Re: a comment on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer |
9-Nov-03/6:38 PM |
Honestly? that you that you seem to not understand that it isn't "people" i dont want to know think of my personal writes- ITS YOU.
If someone else wanted to say something bad- then fine, but not you. You have irritated me to a point, that i really don't want to hear it anymore... yes, your that annoying, and you comment on pieces like this just to annoy me- meaning YOUR input is worthless.
thats what i think, shithead- and thats the TRUTH- not what you think it is, the real truth.
REPEAT: this is about YOU- not anyother ranker here-so get that in your miniscule brain.
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| Re: Love (pyramus and thisbe) by New Life Drug |
8-Nov-03/11:11 PM |
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| Re: take me home by New Life Drug |
8-Nov-03/11:09 PM |
You know what that means?
Gills are next on your "need to get" list. Blessed with seven- btw, you mix well with my meth injection.
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| Re: a comment on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer |
8-Nov-03/7:03 PM |
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sandpaper.. damn it, you always have a foot ahead of me: sandpaper it is.
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| Re: a comment on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer |
8-Nov-03/6:59 PM |
well, you gave me an idea:
What do you think about "Sand reminds me of your ashes" ?
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| Re: a comment on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer |
8-Nov-03/6:56 PM |
Well, thats why i asked for help. :/
The other title wont do:
He was a swimmer, and he didn't like boats.
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| Re: Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer |
8-Nov-03/6:47 PM |
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I just couldnt resist.. plus today I didn't feel like making a sonnet- I've become addicted to the vilanelle.
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| Re: Greybie Blue by abecedarian |
8-Nov-03/4:45 PM |
polyamorist isnt in my dictionary.. exactly what does it mean?
Aside from that, I bless you with 7.
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| Re: an early discovery (reworking) by richa |
8-Nov-03/4:42 PM |
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Pity the trees that stoop- 10.
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| Re: Givin' in by Freethinker1602 |
8-Nov-03/4:32 PM |
I said that once, but then I got a nine inch nail in me bumcheeck and quickly got up.
Last Days become another Beginning, and fate was written with a pencil- get yourself JesusCream - White Out Made To Erase Sin!! (Gods Pen belongs to me, sorry-I stole that and his Buddha Joint)
heres a 6.
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| Re: The lasts of Joe by Freethinker1602 |
8-Nov-03/4:26 PM |
Hide? Grow nut hair and give her a kiss already.
Blessed with 4.
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| Re: a comment on The lasts of Joe by Freethinker1602 |
8-Nov-03/4:24 PM |
A girlie gave him a lil hug'n'kiss, and he found out that he wasnt evil, just seriously loaded on the 120 proof Denial&Sour-Grape Vermouth.
Some gremlins still have a fur coat in their secret closet.
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| Re: a comment on Whispering (Zero Atmosphere) by Y2kSlamPoet |
8-Nov-03/7:50 AM |
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the word shroom is used and you automaticaly assume the topic is actually about shroomin- you crack me up.
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